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Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
Important Issue in the Chair: I don't swear. Mainly because my parents would kill me if I did. Now - as you have likely noticed - there is some cursing ...
Aug 23, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind & Darkness: Draft Two [1-4]: Closed
Hehe, laughing at loud? Always a good thing. I was aiming to break up some of Shan's morose desolation with Livny's grand ability to annoy. Lol, I seriously have no ...
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: The Silmarillion
Brilliant mythology, well-told and tragic, as complete as any of the myths and legends of various cultures - and written by one man. ^_^ Er, I gave it a 10.
Aug 21, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind and Darkness: Draft One [1-3]: Closed
( continued ) You want my papers, dammit? Shan rasped, gasping for air. Fine. See this? He let go of the wall with effort and pulled his rumpled certification out ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind and Darkness: Draft One [1-3]: Closed
( repost from TSR )Finally, DD...I get to posting a (partial) critique of our dear CofW&D. !_! Firstly, I enjoyed reading it - a good read in all particulars with ...
Aug 15, 2006 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
'Tis truth. Tolkien is literary, in the most profound sense. Rowling is entertaining. They really needn't be compared. Their aim is different; unless you intend to compare aims, in which ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: The Chair of Wind and Darkness: Draft One [1-3]: Closed
Lol, a Russo feel to it? Heh, that's what Reas said... 18th-19th C... it could be, but I never really took the time to figure out the exact times... it's ...
Aug 14, 2006 -
Re: Lay of De Harain
I'm still enjoyed this, Niamh - quite a bit. ^_^ A few points the meter, I think, breaks with longer words than you need, or extra. He knew not why ...
Aug 11, 2006 -
Re: Ainor - Prologue
'Fixed'. (I hate things when they have huge spaces between them. Especially speech.) I don't blame you...but it does make it more easy to critique in the forum. ^_^'' Anyhow, ...
Aug 10, 2006 -
Re: My Loves
Ah. Well then, good luck with the ...poetry and all that that implies. ^_^ I don't think there's anything else to say; unless you've decided you'd like to have all ...
Aug 10, 2006 -
Re: My Loves
You're not channeling Oscar Wilde by any chance, are you, Sharty? Not that he had a shark infatuation... Isn't the time it takes to read, think over, and critique a ...
Aug 10, 2006 -
Re: Zhaim (sketch/FDWC)
Thanks very much, Rei. ^_^ It may be (ought to be) expanded to a short story rather than merely a sketch - hopefully it won't be quite as abrupt that ...
Aug 7, 2006 -
Re: Zhaim (sketch/FDWC)
Thanks DD and Fand for the thoughts, very much. ^_^ As to the dialogue - how was it hard to read? The scattered aspect, or the description in between? Vindictive ...
Aug 7, 2006 -
Re: The Siege
Oy. You need to check your formatting. At the moment - well, it would make a good siege wall, if you know what I mean. Break it into lines/paragraphs. You ...
May 16, 2006 -
Re: Integrate This! (Now a YWS Fanfiction!)
This is still amusing...somehow. 0o ^_^ And I think following the debating debacle concering characterization - you should add a huge dispute between some of the SPEWers over whether they're ...
May 12, 2006
